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Back to Strawberryland: introduction
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Before I get into my story's introduction; I would like to thank Blackberry Bun for his help on getting me set up. I especially enjoy the title for this forum where all of my stories will be kept, Galaxyman's Tales. It has a nice ring to it, doesn't it? Big Grin Also, when I write my stories, if I am lucky, I may be able to post multiple chapters at one time, or I may be able to post one and then it might be awhile before I post again, but when I get around to it, I will post and I can promise that.

This introduction is not the first chapter, but I would think of it as perhaps maybe sort of a synopsis (At least I hope I'm using the term correctly, if I'm not, then please let me know and I will try to find a way to correct this even if I have to get some help) of a story that I am writing on my computer. Now, where I am going to start writing my story here on the forum is nowhere near where I am currently writing the story on my computer. On my computer, I'm at the very beginning where so far, nothing interesting has happened at all. Also, Due to copyright laws, I'll probably not get anywhere near where I want to get. (And that's with the permission to use the characters) If I'm lucky enough, I may even get my first book approved and published. However if worse comes to worse and...(I don't mean to look at the downsides or be negative in anyway)...there is likely a 98% chance that it will; at least, I will be able to see the parts of my story that I never got to on this forum. Anyway, without further ado, here is the intro.

A long time ago, I, Galaxyman, along with some of my friends didn't really believe that cartoons could ever exist in the world that we live in. (As you already know, I'm talking about Earth) I always thought that it was a possibility though, mostly because I've always believed that. Anyway, I had a dream where I spoke to "The higher power" and he told me that I am suppose to look out for 5 cartoon characters; although at the time, I didn't know that and so I was unaware of who I was suppose to look for. Later on, I found The Purplepieman, Sour grapes, Pupcake, Custard(The dog and cat were captured and being held by Pieman and Sourgrapes as part as some crazy plan (nothing new, right?) and Huck (Huck was also captured by the two, but since he was a little more "cooperative" They, Pieman and Sourgrapes, decided to not really hold him as a "hostage" against his will. When we all first met, Pieman and crew weren't really as ecstatic as I was. As time went on though and we had all of these adventures where we all had to help each other out, we all slowly began to enjoy hanging out with each other more.

Now after all of our adventures that we have had, we have decided to go to Strawberryland. Pupcake, Custard, and Huck are very excited because they kept on wanting to go back to their home and I finally am letting them since we currently are not on any more adventures and things have calmed down so that we could go back to Strawberryland. Anyways, we are now in Strawberryland and, much to his own surprise and his "better judgment" as he would describe it, the pieman has let Pupcake and Custard go back to their home and he never even tried to prevent Huck from leaving either. In return, the 3 of them have agreed to come visit from time to time. Meanwhile, my friends and I are staying with the brother and sister in an abandoned house in Strawberryland that is nowhere near Strawberrys or anyone of her friend's houses. The purplepieman is doing his best to be very good, although he tries his very best to keep his evil side alive, although he's not as successful as he had been in the past.

Well, there is my introduction on what's happened. I'm sorry if I didn't exactly fill you in on what is to come to my stories, but I can tell you that it will be very intresting. Although my story mainly focuses on The purple pieman, sourgrapes, myself, and my friends, it will also include Strawberry and her friends and also some other characters from other shows depending on how my story is going. The stories will include action, suspense, surprises, comedy, mystery, (although I feel suspense and mystery are the same) and although I disaprove, it will also include romance :oops:

If you want to discuss anything that is in this introduction, whether it be the characters, speculate what you think might happen in the future, or just to discuss what you thought about how I wrote this intro, whether good or bad (although I hope it's more good than bad) then let's discuss about it. Be sure to keep an eye out for the first chapter of "Back to Strawberryland.
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I think synopsis is the right word, though I must say that this synopsis you wrote is very short and doesn't tell much about what you're going to write.

In any case, I'm looking forward to it. Big Grin
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Blackberry Bun Wrote:I must say that this synopsis you wrote is very short and doesn't tell much about what you're going to write.

In any case, I'm looking forward to it. Big Grin

The reason the synopsis is not about what I'm going to write is because I don't want to write about what is going to be in my story is because, I do not want to write about something that is going to happen and then I end up about writing about something else. I'm just afraid that would happen. Also, when I wrote my intro, it was really long when I previewed it and I didn't want to make anyone bored reading too long of an introduction. What I can say about the future is that Strawberryland will come under attack, and I can say, without giving too much away, that one or two of the attacks might come from someone in Strawberryland, but that's one of the secrets that's going to come.

I'm glad you are looking forward to it. I'm going to try to work on the first chapter tomorrow and try to have it posted either tomorrow or the day after tomorrow; however, I can't promise anything, but I will try.
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